July 29, 2011

First of summer

Feels like a Sunday
soaking in Urbandub bliss
‘The night just feels right.’

(2007-09-08)

And now an “award acceptance” mini-poem:

Thank you for this Owl

Didn’t know they give awards

To those who rhyme afoul

(…that would be me)

Thank you Thursday Poets Rally for the Perfect Poem Award.

I nominate EVILPUSSYCATWRITER for the next award.

27 comments

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July 30, 2011 - 1:37 am Jingle

cute, well put.

🙂

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July 30, 2011 - 9:39 am jennifaye

Thanks for dropping by Jingle. 🙂 And thanks for including me in your poetry blog. Really appreciate it.

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July 30, 2011 - 10:09 am The Oldstrong

Now that is a picture of a bliss…a real cool poem

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July 30, 2011 - 2:16 pm The Lonely Recluse

Real peaceful sounding poem, other than that when I read urbandub I kinda expect dubstep, but thats my fault not yours. Short and sweet, good poem.
The Lonely Recluse.

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July 30, 2011 - 3:53 pm jennifaye

Thanks for the comments, oldstrong and lonelyrecluse.

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July 30, 2011 - 3:55 pm jennifaye

@lonely recluse – Urbandub is a Filipino rock-alternative band. Music moves one to wax poetic, don’t you think? 🙂

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July 30, 2011 - 4:41 pm Harry Nicholson

I just had to find out about Urbandub. The world is a network now.
Thanks for your comment on Sleights Moor, Jennyfaye.

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July 30, 2011 - 6:19 pm charlesmashburn

Thanks for explaining Urbandub. I thought you’d invented a new word! Cool poem. Refreshing! (But the Urbandub thing now has the rub-adub-dub thing circling in my brain. DOH!)

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July 30, 2011 - 8:16 pm Ravenblack

Lovely. I do not know the band, but how nice it is to relax, listening to good music, on any night would feel like a weekend or a sunday. 🙂

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July 30, 2011 - 9:19 pm dsnake1

i guess it is, listening to music you like. 🙂

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July 30, 2011 - 9:54 pm Heaven

short and relaxing to read ~

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July 30, 2011 - 10:18 pm A.B. Thomas

Very cool write and the band is quite good, I think I’ll be watching a few more of their videos

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July 30, 2011 - 10:55 pm hannah

sounds like a chill night. glad to know those still exist.

ps. good call on the urbandub link. =)

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July 30, 2011 - 11:31 pm Baishali

simple and peaceful … thanks for sharing.

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July 31, 2011 - 12:12 am Aaron Smigielski

“The night just feels right.” I like that.

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July 31, 2011 - 4:14 am Usha Dawn

It gives a soothing, relaxing feeling as one read till the end…
amazing feeling
Keep writing
Cheers

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July 31, 2011 - 10:39 am elainedanforth

A fitting greeting to the feeling of summer.

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July 31, 2011 - 11:32 pm jennifaye

@AB Thomas- Oh yes, the band’s good. Glad I posted a link. 🙂

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August 1, 2011 - 1:35 am johnewordslinger

nice, hoping all nights are great right? lol, thank you, much appreciated, WS

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August 1, 2011 - 3:53 pm Chimnese

u make me miss summer …lovely write

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August 1, 2011 - 5:56 pm magher1

So carefree! I love this feeling 🙂

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August 2, 2011 - 9:24 pm Jingle

well deserved award, thanks for the acceptance.
way to go.

😉

Happy Rally.

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August 3, 2011 - 11:50 am jennifaye

Ji, it’s an honor to be part of Poets Rally. The online community support is encouraging for aspiring writers/poets. Cheers! 🙂

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