I surrender
Resistance is futile
Take a leap from the logical
Learn life’s greatest lesson
From a jolt of inspiration
Detach from the pain
Of all-knowing, all-seeing
Surge toward just being
Countless possibilities
More than the stars
Shimmering from afar
Sing to me
And what else I could be
Let go of what I know
And what I don’t
To explore the infinite
Boundless beauty
Immensity
Then turn my back
On brokenness
Unkept promises
And everything
That did not go as planned
For there really is no plan
Right here
Right now
Undone
Unspoken
The universe gives me exactly what I need
Not what I want
So I let go
I trust
Breathe
Believe
Finally
I surrender
(Written for Three Word Wednesday – Detach Jolt Surge, Poetry Picnic Week 25, The Poetry Pantry #86 and Sunday Scribblings #305 – Lesson)
what true words, love this.
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Thanks Snowflakes for visiting my blog.
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Universe gives me what I need not what I want. So true.
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Sometimes prayers are answered in the least expected form or manner. 🙂
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This is really, really good. I love the idea of taking a leap from the logical to find possibilities as many as there are stars. That is what we are doing as poets, after all!
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Thanks mbwilliams! I rReally appreciate the comment. 🙂
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beautiful I like that just surrender
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Yes. Sometimes, surrendering also means having the strength and wisdom to let go.
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What I need, not what I want. At least get it.
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exactly 🙂
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lovely title, at times, yes, step back and the sky is bluer,
way to go.
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Thanks Taylor.
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I enjoyed this, read it quietly and aloud. It resonated. Thanks for sharing it!
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Thanks for the kind words Shanyn.
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Beautiful poem! I don’t really get the same pleasure from the memos I write… but then again they are usually for my employer, not for me. 🙂
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What if memos were done poetically? in stanzas? in rhymes?:))
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Lovely inspirational words ~
Thanks for sharing this ~
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thanks grace!
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Detach from the pain
Of all-knowing, all-seeing
Surge toward just being
I loved this stanza. Wonderful words!
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some truth in “what you don’t know won’t hurt you.”
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Very nice. I especially like the last two stanzas. Breathe. Believe.
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The most important thing in the world- BREATHE.
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nice tribute to star trek.
elephant slave
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😉
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