May 4, 2012

Hawaiian Tropic

Coconuts and cream
Scent lingers, tropical steam
Oh hear the sun scream

(Written for Thursday Poets Rally Week 67)

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May 4, 2012 - 11:30 am henryclemmons

Just returned from vacationing on Florida’s Gulf coast. This brought back good memories, except for the first day burn. Very sensory. I like.

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- May 4, 2012 - 9:05 pm Jennifaye
  
  Thanks Henry. Hope you enjoyed your vacation. 🙂
  
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May 4, 2012 - 11:31 am justinwriter

Nice, Jennifaye. I’ve never thought of the sun having a voice, but I think it really works here.

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- May 4, 2012 - 9:09 pm Jennifaye
  
  Hi Justin. Sometimes the heat makes me want to scream too! 😀
  
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May 4, 2012 - 4:38 pm mbwilliams

A nice mix of the senses portraying the atmosphere of the tropics

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- May 4, 2012 - 9:10 pm Jennifaye
  
  Thanks Mark. It is scorching where Im from. B-)
  
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