May 4, 2012 Hawaiian Tropic Coconuts and cream Scent lingers, tropical steam Oh hear the sun scream (Written for Thursday Poets Rally Week 67) About these ads Share this:MoreLike this:Like Loading...
May 4, 2012 - 11:30 am henryclemmons Just returned from vacationing on Florida’s Gulf coast. This brought back good memories, except for the first day burn. Very sensory. I like. Reply
May 4, 2012 - 11:31 am justinwriter Nice, Jennifaye. I’ve never thought of the sun having a voice, but I think it really works here. Reply
May 4, 2012 - 4:38 pm mbwilliams A nice mix of the senses portraying the atmosphere of the tropics Reply
Just returned from vacationing on Florida’s Gulf coast. This brought back good memories, except for the first day burn. Very sensory. I like.
Thanks Henry. Hope you enjoyed your vacation.
Nice, Jennifaye. I’ve never thought of the sun having a voice, but I think it really works here.
Hi Justin. Sometimes the heat makes me want to scream too!
A nice mix of the senses portraying the atmosphere of the tropics
Thanks Mark. It is scorching where Im from. B-)